By :- KajalPanghal4

Review by :- shreexsidneet

Title (3/5) :- The title is attractive. But I would suggest that you should have tried to be creative.

Cover (3/5) :- Cover is really simple. And gives good vibes and directly related to the title.

Blurb (4/5) :- I loved how you described it. And the question allow readers to be more curious of what happened? I would suggest you to write some more questions like What will happen when they cross paths? What's the reason for their separation?

Prologue (4/5) :-  The prologue is really captive. It makes readers to wonder  with
different questions.

Plot (4/5) :- The plot is really unique and easy to understand. The cute fights of Kaira and Abhishek just make the story good in itself. The flashback in the middle of story leave readers wonder. The comedy takes story to an another level. The story of Avneil is the most interesting part. Your questions keep reader connected to the story.

Grammar (2/5) :- There are many grammatical errors in the story. And in  some places you have used wrong words such as Avni confirm Neil it should be Avni confront Neil.

Character Development (4/5) :- All the character are really good. But you need to work on character of Juhi. It's somewhat kind confusing in some places. I personally loved the character of Avi and Kaira.

Reviewer's note :- I loved the way you mixed comedy with all the suspences. And your questions leave readers more curious. You should work on the grammar, rest everything is good.

Total:- 24/35

I wish you best for the book, I am really sorry if I said anything wrong. The above review was just my point of view about your story. Taking it into consideration or not is totally your choice.