By :- shreexsidneet

Title (4/5) - The title is really attractive. It attracts the readers. It builds out a curiosity in readers to find out more about story.

Cover (3/5) - The cover is really good. And the best thing is it is directly related to the story.

Blurb (2/5) - I loved the way you described your blurb The questions which you have put in it. But I think you should have not described about characters in it. It is really important not reveal about characters in blurb as it won't create the enthusiasm of finding about characters.

Prologue (3/5) - The prologue is really good as it creates a  suspence to readers to find out about Who's part of story is being told. And who is the Person holding gun? Who 's the child and a lot more.

Plot (4/5) - The plot is really simple. There were a lot suspences about Avu's character. But you should have also kept suspences regarding Sid's character as you have just normally told about him. I loved the way you described Avu's feelings but you should have described Sid's feelings a little more.
And negative point is that you still haven't told about Avu's side fully. Like how Mr. Nandra was not the gun man? If he was not the gun man then who was?

Grammar (4/5) - There are few grammatical errors. But the way you wrote your story using advance and easy english makes the story really attractive.

Character Development (3/5) - I recommend you that you should described clearly the bond between Avneet and Reem, who have shown that Avneet wanted to provide best life to her sister from her side. But you haven't described what Reem thinks about Avneet.

Reviewer's note - I want you elaborate more about  relations of the main character with other characters. And also advance a little bit of Sid's proposal for marriage. And elaborate about Sid's feelings a little more.

Total - ( 23/35 ) 

I wish you best for the book, I am really sorry if I said anything wrong. The above review was just my point of view about your story. Taking it into consideration or not is totally your choice.