Break-up Club

By :- TheRemixGenius


Review by :- shreexfanfic 


 Title (3/5):- Its really simple and explains the entire base of story very clearly. 


 Cover (2/5):- Cover is pretty good but you should have tried something more attractive and related to the title. 


 Blurb (4/5) :- Blurb is nice it explains the plot of story, about main characters and their roles. I would recommend to add some suspense also as it will help reader to be curious. 


 Prologue :- The story doesn't contain any prologue though it have one. 


 Plot (4/5) :- The story is really interesting and somehow explains about the mentality of our society. It is based on Raja and Logan who rumoured to be in a relationship though they were bestfriends. So, to get rid of those rumours and free people from relationship rumours, they together started a break up club which is helpful to those singles who are tired of relationship gossips. It was designed to break the couples so all the rumours may end. And it's really a cool and different idea. 


 Grammar (4/5) :- I'm quite pleased with grammar part. The story has good humour and also explains everything clearly. They are few spelling mistakes. 


 Character Development (3/5) :- The characters of Indy Mehta needs some development. And there is a need to explain the bond of Raja and Logan a more. 


 Reviewer's Note :- The story has a unique plot and advanced grammar, all the characters are good but in some places the characters are difficult to understand. There is need to work on character of Indy Mehta.


Total:-24/35




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