By -  Mochis4lifeq52627

Review by -  shreexfanfic

Status - Ongoing 

 Title (3/5) :- The title is really important. And it somehow attracts the readers to find more out fleeting moment of Ramayan. 

 Cover(3/5) :- The cover is simple yet elegant. It looks royal and the best thing is that it is directly related to the story. 

 Blurb(4/5) :- The blurb of the story is unique. And it leaves readers thinking about the different questions. 

 Prologue :- The story doesn't contains any prologue. But I suggest you to add it, as keeps readers attached to the book. 

 Plot (4/5) :- The plot is great and much unique. It tells us about the special moments of Prince Ram and his brothers. The has shown us the golden days which we haven't known for long. The childishness of the shatrughan, and wisdom of Ram are beautifully explained. The Lakshman character makes readers curious. 

 Grammar (5/5) :- I'm quite happy with the grammar used in book. The choice of words and writing skills are really good. I haven't found any kind of grammatical mistakes in it. 

 Character Development (4/5) :- All the characters are good. And suit for their role but try make Lakshman's role a more easy, at some places we have difficulty in understanding his emotions.

 Reviewer's Note :- The concept is really good and very different, in some places changes are required. Rest of the work is nice.

Total:- 23/35

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