FriendscallmeMoonpie

So I saw your new rough sketch and I think it is TRULY AMAZING. But there is some advice I can give (Actually only one drawing):

In your drawing, you were trying to reach a shocked, shaken (SHOOKETH) expression. Moonpie's face was good, but her body seems too straight to be shaken.

Here's, what I think, a shaken body:

Take this as a constructive criticism. I don't intend to make you upset.