Ok, so there are a few things I wanna ask.
1. Should I write a better version of this?
So what I mean by better I mean, better grammar, writing style, and add/remove a few things. I'm cringin at this story.
2. (Mainly for the guys) What do you guys find attractive in a girl?
I'm struggling. This time it isn't a 2D crush. Lol I'm kinda embarrassed.
3. (Mainly for the girls) If you were homosexual, what would you find attractive in a girl?
I don't know why I'm doing this, but what do girls find attractive in girls, and how would you show it in an not obvious way? I don't know.
4. What do you think if this fanfic?
See I'm really nervous about it now. Um.... I just want feedback. At this point, I don't care if you guys give negetive feedback. It really won't offend me. Just give me some tips. If I rewrite this I'll use those tips.
This is all optional. You don't have to answer any. I'm just wondering. Love you guys. Thank you all for reading this book. Like how tf did I get 18.1k reads. Really unbelievable. Thanks guys.