Hey guys its me again! To keep things short here I just wanted to say Thank You so very much for giving my story a view!! I honestly am not that great at writing but I try my best, also please give me feedback on how the story is going so far! Thanks again!!☺️
I woke up in an unfamiliar room, I froze frightened Where am I?!? How did I get here...Oh then it hit me in a wave of memories. You know, that moment you can't remember anything and your panicking, and THEN you remember...yeah thats what happened. I glance around and spot a slice of pie on the floor near the bed. I lean down and grab it Thanks Toriel!
(Timeskip~ I don't care I'm lazy)
"Hey, Toriel" I say staring at the stairs that led to the basement, "Yes, my child" she responded looking up at me from her spot on the chair.
"What's down there?" I asked, pointing towards the stairs, Toriel paled slightly "U-um, NOTHING my child!!!!" she yelped sounding slightly panicked. "Toriel...what is actually down there?" I asked suspiciously staring her down. She lowered her head "W-well, I-its...thewayoutoftheruins" she blurted out, so fast I almost missed it. "Wait! You mean there is a way out?" I asked wide-eyed, sounding ashamed Toriel whispered "Yes...I just didn't want you to go out there and get hurt...". I looked at my feet "Toriel...I promise I won't get hurt, but I need to get back to the surface" I murmured. She sighed, crestfallen "Oh alright, my child I will show you the way" I nodded my thanks. "Toriel, don't worry about me, please?" I pleaded with her. She sighed again and nodded slowly.
(Timeskip via MandoPony's Just Gold)
I walked outside, the frosty air biting my skin. I looked around nervously, I felt as if I was being watched. I continued forward, hearing my boots crunched into the snowy ground. I came to a patch of ice, and looked around. The ice covered the entire path...with no way around it. I tentatively set my foot on the ice, then my other. Halfway across, CRACK the ice broke and I felt icy fingers clutch my entire body as I fell into the water. It was deep I could barely see the slight sliver of light, where I had fallen in. Then, as the world went black, I saw a shadow speeding through the water towards me.
??? POV
I had seen the human girl walk out of Toriel's house and onto the path, as she glanced around I ducked behind a tree. My whoopie cushion in the hand trick ALWAYS works. (Can u guess who it is yet?) She was walking across the ice coming closer and closer towards my hiding place, when suddenly CRACK the ice beneath her feet broke, plunging her into the freezing water. After a few moments, when she still hadn't come up, I realized that it was deeper than I thought. I dived into the water, and saw her unconscious form drifting deeper and deeper.
CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!! Sorry I hate cliffhangers sooooo very much but I've decided to leave it here!