send feedback on how i can make it better pls? I'll take harsh criticism as long as it's not meant to be mean
Andy Marshall was a good guy with some bad luck. Mostly. Okay, how about that Andy Marshall was a good guy that made some bad decisions? Andy couldn't even convince himself of that. When his life finally starts to brighten up (and so does his optimism), he finally thinks he's got a chance, but then the worst happens and he can't be so sure.
Quinn Noir always dreamed of becoming the world's greatest detective, but her sun sensitivity made it difficult to pursue her passion. However, her life takes an unexpected turn when she dies and reincarnates into a magical world filled with fantasy races and spells. Armed with a powerful System, Quinn sets off to attend an academy where she can hone her skills and make her dream a reality. And if she happens to pick up a girlfriend along the way, well that wouldn't hurt.I will be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com as well.
WARNING‼️This story may contain a lot of errors, typographical errors and wrong use of grammars.PrologueRAFA!!!!! "Hindi mapigilang sigaw ng isang binata sa kanyang nakababatang kapatid. Sob* I-t's hurt" saad ng dalagang umiiyak sabay turo sa kanyang kaliwang dibdib. "Rafa, please listen to Kuya. Stop loving him! Stop chasing him! Stop chasing someone who's done loving you! Stop hurting yourself, Rafa." Saad nito at niyakap nang mahigpit ang kapatid na tuluyan na ngang nanlambut ang mga paa kasabay ang malakas na paghagulhol nito" How can this world so mean to me? Sob*sob. I have never ever hurt someone's heart. Sob* why do I suffer this? Bakit parang kung tratohin ako ng mundo ay parang napaka laki ng kasalanan ko."Ngumiti ito ng mapakla bago kumalas sa yakap at umupo, tinabihan naman siya ng kapatid.Madilim na ang paligid, nabasag ang katahimikan nang mag salita muli ang dalaga na ngayon ay nakatingala sa langit habang unti unti na namang nagsibagsakan ang mga luha."Para siyang isang bituin kung tingnan ay napakalapit, pero ang totoo ang hirap niyang abutin."""P-ero para pala siyang buwan na darating yung araw na sya'y mawawala din" impit nitong sambit habang pinagmasdan lamang ito ng binata.Hinaplos nito ang pisngi nang dalaga at pinahiran ang luhang patuloy parin sa pag-agos ngumiti ito sa dalaga bago patuloy na nagsalita."Kalimutan mo na siya Rafa at mag simula muli.""Madali lang kasi sayong sabihin yan kuya dahil hindi mo naman naranasan kung gaano kasakit maiwan" saad ng dalaga-Maybe this pain will not easily fade, but one thing is for sure, from now on, I'll stop chasing you, and I'll do my best to just move on. Ngayon sarili ko muna.
The Wayne family need more personnel so they hired a new maid. With their secret they have to keep she in the dark at all time but she has a secret as well.warnings mentions some self-harm, blood and other stuff but it will work out in the end
There has been an outbreak of a bloody virus, which has been identified as a "governmental force system" by Stormi and Lukas, two soulmates who met at the beginning of the outbreak and formed the "Bloodshed Prevention Unit". Will they save the human population?
He was a man who seemed to have everything, a great job, a loving family and a fiance who supported him in everything he did. Then why does he feel so empty. Follow him along as he goes through all kind of different adventures. Meeting his soulmate along the way. BL system story
A Transmigration Novel of Seven Arcs. Nicholas Kim's future unfolded after his death. Despite thinking his rescue of the drowning child was just pure instinct, and his subsequent death merely an unfortunate consequence, the world regarded him as a hero. As such, he was entered into The System and given the opportunity to earn enough karmic points to re-enter his body at the point of death, thereby reviving himself and continuing his life. System: Author: "Aren't you supposed to give him some help?"System:Nicholas: "What kind of author forgets to give the system a voice?"Author: *runs away and hides*-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------This is an original work influenced by the many translated Chinese transmigration novels I have read. While I am putting this under the Romance genre (it's an LGBTQI friendly romance so if that's not your thing then save us all the trouble) it's there mostly because there's no other clear cut genre that transmigration novels like this one belong to! Why do we skip between sci-fi, fantasy, ancient settings etc? It would be so much easier for the author if we just stayed put.This story contains mature themes such as suicide and self-harm, mental illness, self-sacrifice, war, and racism and bigotry. I won't be putting disclaimers in front of each chapter with these themes but will include a basic run down of the themes in each Arc as they are written. If the themes and issues included in this story are troubling, or trigger an emotional response in the reader then please, reach out for help and talk to a counsellor. Arc 1- self-sacrifice, domestic violence/abusive relationship, Arc 2- suicide, mental illness, warArc 3- Arc 4-Arc 5-Arc 6-Arc 7-
"hey, that's one badass stapler." ✔️number five fanfictionumbrella academy season one[lowercase intended]cover by @ssolarsystems