The Land of Kein is inhibited by many. The Lich and the Humans being one of them, they both had hatred against each other which resulted in a fiesty relationship. Although violence wasn't a daily occurence due to a barrier that prohibited both of the sides from passing through. But one day, a knight gets knowledge that a Lich is trying to pass through the border, he heads there to see...
Тэхён с города Тэгу, на прошлой неделе он с родителями переехали в столицу Южной Кореи, а именно в город Сеул, друзей он пока что еще не успел найти, да и человеком он был закрытым и спокойным, что свойственно для омежки.Судьба его сведёт с Чон Чонгуком, сам того не желая Тэ начал....Если интересно, что будет дальше, то прочтите эту историю. Строго не судите, это моя первая работа~
Disclaimer I wrote this when I was 16, but a million books later imma stick beside it. This is just a couple things I notice in books that make them difficult to read. I included examples and ways to fix them. Threw in a little humor and if you ignore my grammar errors it's got some great tips. Enjoy!
She had only wanted to have a working marriage and a happy family. Despite that, her husband leaves her for another woman after the loss of their unborn child, and just as she starts to pick herself up, she dies in a car crash.But this isn't the end of her story.Her spirit is picked up by her brother, a beginner god who needs help raising the hero of his fledgling world. Thinking he is offering her an opportunity to be a mother, she readily agrees, and he sends her down to his world with the gift of healing and a semi-ageless body to aid her on her quest. She quickly finds her little boy and is overjoyed to have someone to baby at last. But this hero doesn't want her as his mother. He wants her as something else.
The First Draft. It's a writer's greatest success, but more often it's our biggest dilemma. It's that nagging feeling something is not quite right. How did that great dialogue and mind-blowing action in our heads turn into this - THIS CRAP!? Read this quick guide for a few ways you can work towards a final draft.
This isn't your average writing tips.This is ADVANCED writing tips.But still for all people to enjoy 😉 This (should) update every day.
How often have you felt sleepy while reading a book and how many times you eat your head trying to figure out where exactly your story has gone wrong? We all have hit a bump like this in our lives, havn't we? "She went to the bus-stop, hopped on to the bus, sat at the window seat. Then she reached school and went for her classes. After her classes during the recess, she chatted with her two best friends". Aren't you wondering why this excerpt is a plain bore? Thinking of which what is exactly wrong with it! Answer is, basically everything! Because it becomes a snooze fest when you give hourly updates to your readers.Instead of telling that your protagonist is very tensed about his exam results, why not show it. "He bit his nails and felt a growing ache within his belly, 'God please let me pass', he prayed". The magic of this is, it helps your audience feel the emotions of the protagonist.Curious to know how to overcome those aforementioned obstacles and tell a convincing tale? Worry not, help is right in your hands, well within your phone, in the Wattpad app or on your computer screen.This is a self-support book into debunking the many codes of sound story-telling that will enable you to not only master the art but also excel at it.So why the wait??
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Hey people of the internet. This is my first book so feedback is great I want to become a better stronger writer so criticism is needed also I own non of this art. I change up some stuff. If you have any ideas or things you want to see plz let me know!