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There was a boy that likes a girl. He always took notice of her even when she wasn't aware of his presence. With his nerdy appearance and his black-rimmed eyeglasses, he thought it was improbable that he could have a chance with her. He was just a nobody. Always afraid of taking chances, fearing of stumbling in the midst of his words, and his confidence shrinking. Even the thought of her, he has the butterflies growing in his stomach. With just one look at her and he was already in trouble.All he needed would just be that little push to overcome his shyness and taking a step forward.--#1 on #highschoollove#2 on #loveatfirstsight#122 on #firstlove#14 in #shortstory Thank you!

notmystory !!! for offline reading purpose only.. mtl!!The famous first goddess in the fairy world was reborn in the modern world with the eyes of God. She was born with a noble destiny, but the idiots in the family she was reborn into regarded her as a monster and ordered her to be killed! Fortunately, she was adopted by a kind farmer. From then on, she started a business with her adopted farmer relatives, led them to success, and gave them wealth and honor.Novel keywords: Reborn in the 1980s I became an almighty boss without pop-ups, Reborn in the 1980s I became an almighty boss txt full download, Reborn in the 1980s I became an almighty boss latest chapter reading

это фф со стеклом, или неат... ну вообщем, мальчик ли Феликс радуется жизни и находит друга Хёнджина, или не друга?... вообщем, у ли появляется тяжёлая болезнь...

What Should I Do If I'm Being Targeted by a Paranoid Attack [Quick Wear]被偏执攻盯上了怎么办[快穿]Author杭白Status166 ChaptersDescription Mi Dao is a game screenwriter who is male and loves males. Every time he writes a game, he will bring private goods with him, set the character of his crush on important characters, and add all kinds of YY(sexual thoughts). These YY include but are not limited to: Blackening, Jealousy, Shura Field, "Beep-" and "Beep-". Until one day, Mi Dao accidentally wore it in, and accidentally increased the favorability of important characters. So, he pretended to be aggrieved and shouted "No" while he couldn't collapse, while listening to his crush saying to him in various ways: "Senior brother, I won't allow you to leave me again." "Everything about you belongs to me. ." "I can give you everything except freedom." Ahhh what a delightful God unfolds he can ahhhh! ! ! Afterwards, Mi Dao snorted with a lollipop by the bedside: "Don't ask, it's cool to act."---NOTE: FOR OFFLINE PURPOSES SO DON'T REPOST MTLED IF YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND THEN IT IS IN POOR QUALITY I DID THIS FOR PEOPLE LIKE ME WHO CAN'T AFFORD PROPERLY TRANSLATED AND LIMITED INTERNET CONNECTION SO PLEASE DON'T CRITICIZE THE QUALITY NOR THE WAY I MTLED IT THANK YOU

" H-hyung... I-i am s-sorry, i-i won't ever r-run a-away, p-pls don't h-hurt m-e" , jungkook cried . He was tied to a chair with a help of a rope. "You know how much hyung loves you, you are the only family hyung has... What will I do without you , kookie", Taehyung said scarily as he heated a metal rod over the flame, the molten metal flowing. He walked near jungkook who cried in fear. " Hyung is not going to hurt you " , he said tugging jungkook's hair behind his ears , "But this is going to make you think twice before stepping out of the house ", he said as he placed the molten rod on jungkook's feet. Jungkook cried out in pain....... Dive into the story of a psychotic thriller and killer series, a dark love that makes you scream your lungs out.Read the book to know more ❤. This book is not b×b love but they have brotherly obsession.

( Previously named as: The Explorers ( A Dandy's World fan story ) ) ( The Secret of Flickerika is an OC story with some mechanics from Dandy's World )( WARNING: May contain sad scenes? and blood ) After an accident that led to the shutdown of Flickerika, our remaining characters were taken care by scientists in a laboratory, where they test how they would interact with children.But when a group of Toonies left and never came back, Vincent and Hiro found a letter, that led our group to their home, Flickerika.This is where their adventure starts.

𝄡⨾𓍢ִ໋ REQUESTS ARE CLOSED!𝄡⨾𓍢ִ໋ Cover made by me!𝄞₊ ⊹ I can't believe I'm doing this...𝄞₊ ⊹ All characters belong to Kaaatie on YouTube! (Except for you, the one and only Reader!)𓏲𝄢~ Started 6/26/24𓏲𝄢~ Ended (TBD)

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